My Music Magazine Double page spread using InDesign FINAL

After planning my double page spread flat plan and a first draft, I  got my peers to assess what they thought of my initial draft, and they noticed that I didn't have a bi line which is a common feature in music magazines and so I added one over the top of my main feature image. Also they thought that it would look more appealing with a more creative font for my main title on the page and I agreed, as I wanted to capture the creativeness within the indie genre in my magazine and so I chose a different font that I think turned out well. I also used InDesign to produce my double page spread.